Traveler of the Void
Part 1 - City on the Sea
Chapter 1 - On the Hill of the Full Moon - Sangal Hasai
Chagum felt the wind on his skin as light filtered into the oxcart. Someone lifted the blinds from the outside.
"Excuse me, Crown Prince. We have arrived at Sangal Hasai." The guide's voice trembled slightly. He kept his eyes fixed downward so as not to gaze on the royal visage and spoke in a voice so quiet it was difficult to make out his words.
From outside the cart, the sound of cloth flapping in the wind was audible. Chagum's servants were spreading out a carpet for him to walk upon. In the confined space of the cart, Chagum carefully stirred his stiff limbs to movement and prepared to take his first steps outside. If he was an ordinary person, he'd be permitted to trip over his numb feet and even stumble a little without worrying that his people would take it as a bad omen.
The moment he straightened to his full height to take in the view outside the cart, he gasped reflexively. From where he stood to as far as his eyes could see was an endless expanse of ocean. Sangal Yasheera, the Moon Palace, was also in his sight line, nestled in the delta at the mouth of the Taiga River, rising like coral from a sea bed.
"Is that...?" Chagum asked, feeling sincere admiration for the beauty of the scenery before him.
The capital of Sangal had accumulated many poetic names over the years, chief among them the City of Coral and the Gem Floating on the Waves. Viewing the city from the top of the cape, the city resembled nothing so much as a series of interweaving multicolored coral branches. Chagum wondered what material the cape was made of, to make the construction of such a city possible. The ground of the cape was mostly peach in color, mingled with white streaks. The houses that he saw lined up along the shore were the same delicate white color as shellfish.
Four enormous towers, one at each corner of the royal palace, were clearly visible from this height. Each was formed in the shape of a tipped spiral shell. The walls and roofs of the palace were made of shell ceramic tile, famous in Sangal for its beauty and durability. Sunlight reflected off the tile, making the entire palace glow with soft illumination.
The deep blue waves of the ocean contrasted against the shimmering white of the palace and the buildings surrounding it, all set against the backdrop of the faintly peach-colored cliffs. It truly did seem like a city of coral that had risen from the sea.
He noticed someone standing near him. Without looking his way, Chagum said, "It's beautiful. Isn't it, Shuga?"
Shuga nodded. "It most certainly is." Shuga narrowed his eyes and looked up at the sky. "This is the best place possible to read the stars, right here. The sea breeze feels wonderful."
Chagum turned to face his counselor and teacher, the young Star Reader Shuga, and smiled.
"You're the son of a fisherman, aren't you?" Chagum asked. "Do you remember your home when you look out at the sea?"
Shuga's sternly serious face softened into a grin. "Yes...but the color of the sea is different where I'm from. Look at that! A city built around the base of the cliffs, near a riverbed. Crescents of white sand to the east and west, and the color of the sea near shore is a pale green. The sand in my home village is closer to gray than white, and the blue of the sea is much deeper there."
Chagum's eyes tracked the features of the landscape that Shuga pointed out to him. It was indeed the first time he'd ever seen that semi-transparent turquoise color so close to the shore of the ocean.
Chagum squinted, enjoying the warmth of the sun on his face. "The sun is so bright here. The blue of the sky and the blue of the sea are different in New Yogo. I never thought that even things like that would be different in a country bordering ours." He paused. "The world is a magnificent place."
"It certainly is."
"...magnificent, but also huge. It took twelve days from
our border to get here. Sangal's marine transport and marine products have
definitely left an impression on me, and it seems the people cultivate
fields, too."
Shuga's smile deepened. His duties involving Prince Chagum had mainly concerned teaching, study, and research for the past three years. Every time he had the chance to observe the workings of Chagum's obviously keen mind, he became happy beyond words.
I must make sure he is the next Mikado. I must protect him from anything that might make him stray from that path.
The year before, the Third Queen had given birth to a precious son.
Up until that point, Chagum had been the Mikado's only surviving son, a fact that had protected his status as Crown Prince. But as soon as the new prince had been born, the sentiment had spread that now, at least, if the eldest son were lost, there was a spare.
The Mikado was a cold unfeeling man with no real feelings of paternal affection for his children. In his mind's eye, Shuga could easily hear the Mikado say something like, "Feelings of paternal affection are a useless quality in a Mikado." And if it were even suggested to the Mikado that he might behave in a way contrary to his character, the suggester might find themselves thrown out—or disinherited.
And the Crown Prince had been disinherited once. His life had been threatened by secret plots to make him die of an illness or an accident—all orders given to the Mikado's Hunters, eight assassins that received commands from the Mikado in his Hidden Hall. Shuga remembered those times well, as did Chagum.
Chagum had undergone the uniquely unprecedented experience of hosting the egg of a spirit from Nayugu in his body. When the Mikado had learned of this egg's existence inside his son, he had ordered him assassinated in order to protect the purity of his bloodline's reputation.
Hounded by assassins and pursued by devouring spiritual beasts that desired to consume the egg within him, the eleven-year-old Chagum had been only narrowly rescued by Balsa, the female bodyguard and spear wielder. Balsa, along with her childhood friend the herbalist Tanda and Tanda's master, the magic weaver Torogai, had worked together to save the prince's life.
Shuga had also received orders from the Mikado to cooperate on the matter of the assassination of Chagum. But, moved to protect the boy, he had ultimately switched allegiances.
In any event, would-be murderer or not, the Mikado was still Chagum's father, and was legally considered as such. If his older brother Sagum had not passed away of a sudden illness, it was possible that the Mikado's assassins might be pursuing Chagum still. At the loss of his firstborn, the Mikado had made use of Chagum to fulfill his need for an heir.
The Mikado is heartlessly cruel, living divorced from the feelings that bind a parent to a child...only thoughts of his position move his heart.
Once, Shuga had been commanded by the Mikado to wrap Chagum head-to-toe in silk thread to prevent him from being corrupted by the nearness of those of the common class. From birth, the person that was to become the Mikado was treated as a living god. They were secluded in the innermost chambers of the palace and lived an existence in which they rarely so much as touched another person. Being raised in such a way, it was really no surprise that the hearts of the common people and the heart of the Mikado were so different.
But through a strange whim of fate, Chagum had briefly escaped the confines of a future Mikado's upbringing. He had ventured out into the chaotic world and become familiar with how people other than himself lived their lives. More than that, he had formed strong emotional attachments to people that had changed him forever. Bright, kind Chagum, with a secret fire shining out from his soul—and his father, a cold spring hidden in the recesses of a mountain. They did not resemble one another at all.
The Mikado's distinct lack of personal feelings toward Chagum had even made itself apparent in this current visit to Sangal. The only counselor sent with him had been Shuga. Aside from him, only common guards and lower retainers had accompanied Chagum on this journey.
Of course, this wasn't really a diplomatic mission. Or it was, but not the sort of diplomatic mission that required any negotiation or contracts. Chagum was going to attend the coronation ceremony of the new King of Sangal...without the aid of so much as a single civil official familiar with the customs of foreign lands. When Shuga remembered the Mikado giving those orders, a chill went down his spine.
They probably would not arrive at the capital city of Sangal proper until sunset. As soon as they arrived, Chagum's test would begin. He could not fail to properly represent New Yogo.
Sangal was to the southwest of New Yogo. It was a large nation that included an expanse of open country and a vast archipelago of islands. As Chagum had said, it was a country that specialized in trade and marine products.
Their two countries had never been at war. The ancestors of the people of New Yogo had fled the southern countries because of their hatred of war; the Mikado had always consistently promoted peace. But if the various countries to the south ever did dispatch troops to the north, Sangal was in a good position to give New Yogo advance warning of the threat. Better than attempting to weaken their position in war through crippling trade or isolating Sangal, it served everyone’s best interests to work together in a mutually beneficial alliance. New Yogo and Sangal had been trade partners long before the alliance had been proposed, and such an alliance seemed like the next logical step for relations between their two nations.
At the start of the new year, invitations to the coronation celebration of the new king of Sangal had gone out to its allied nations. In Sangal, whenever the king's first son celebrated the birth of a second son, the crown passed from the current king to the king's first son. At the end of the previous year, twin sons had been born to Sangal's Crown Prince Karnan. The transfer of power from father to son would take place shortly after the start of the new year.
The King of Sangal had come personally to New Yogo for the current Mikado's enthronement ceremony to deliver a kingly gift: a treasure chest inlaid with pearl and coral and filled with riches. He had also given the celebratory address at the ceremony.
Now that it was time for a new King of Sangal to be crowned, it was reasonable to expect that the people of Sangal would want their courtesy to be returned in kind. But in New Yogo, the Mikado was considered the soul of the country; he could not possibly travel beyond its borders. That was why Chagum had been selected to attend the coronation in the Mikado's place.
When this news was first announced, Chagum was secretly pleased. He would be able to leave the oppressive atmosphere of the palace to visit a foreign nation freely—if only for once in his life. Even if he had to take part in some complex or bothersome rituals, he didn't really care. He was sure he'd get time to relax and sight-see as well.
"If a new king decided to get crowned among our allies every six months or so, I wouldn't mind," he said lightly.
Shuga immediately reproved him. "Your Majesty. I'm sure I don't need to remind you that Sangal's royal family is deserving of your highest respect. At their core, their people are merchants; the country thrives on sea trade. The King of Sangal personally honored the Mikado with his attendance at his own enthronement ceremony and is acquainted with the measure of your father's character. Sangal is an important ally. If terms ever did break down between our two countries, it would be equally vital for us to retain dominance in diplomatic relations.
"I have said that the people of Sangal are merchants at heart. This is true, but there is another side to them as well—especially the royal family. At the fringes of their domain, pirates govern their own contested territory with strength and violence. The blood of such fierce warriors also flows through Sangal's rulers. Your Majesty, you will be carrying the honor and integrity of this nation when you attend this coronation ceremony. Never forget it."
Chagum snorted through his nose. "...I just wanted to experience what life was like in another place. That's all I said."
Shuga glared at him reproachfully for his casual way of speaking. "As you say," he replied in a pinched tone.
"All right, all right...it's so hard, but I'll talk the way you want me to. I understand that the royal family of New Yogo is supposed to be of divine lineage. Consequently, we must never sully ourselves with outside influences, or smell the smell of blood, and must live a life of tranquil harmony. Like a sword in a jeweled scabbard, capable of cutting, but intimidating all opponents to awe so that the sword need never be drawn."
Shuga smiled at Chagum, then pulled his face into a deliberate frown.
After this conversation, the next month passed with blinding speed. It took two weeks to plan for their departure. The journey itself took another twenty-two days. That journey would finally end in just a few hours.
"Shuga! Look! The ships are gathering!"
Dozens of huge vessels left white trails of froth in their wake as they sailed in the direction of Sangal Yasheera, the Moon Palace. Flags of many colors flapped in the wind. Streamers of colored paper scattered into the sea below the ships.
"That is likely the main fleet of the king of Sangal, along with the ships of his closest allies," Shuga said.
A great wave broke upwards from the surface of the ocean. The harsh cries of seagulls flying above the ships echoed toward shore. Chagum suddenly caught a strong whiff of the salt-smelling sea. His eyes watered; the odor attacked his senses as vigorously as a slap to the face. At that moment, more than the overwhelming power of the sea, he felt a deep sense of his own foreignness in this place.
The ocean spread out before his eyes. Beyond this great expanse of sea that the people of Sangal named the Yaltash Ocean were the southern countries. Two hundred and fifty years ago, Chagum's ancestor, the Mikado Torugal, had fled the fires of war and lands washed in blood to travel across the sea, bringing with him the memories of a powerful culture, military might, and the combined strength of various nations.
Chagum thought that he would have liked to grow up in a southern country, instead of the cold northern nation where he'd been born. As he gazed out at the same ocean Mikado Torugal had sailed across so long ago, a strange feeling overcame him.
"Your Majesty?" Shuga asked. "Let's go."
Chagum nodded. The deep blue of the sea hurt his eyes, and he slowly turned his back on it.
I remember how unhappy I was to discover that the Mikado was a bad guy, after the anime did such a good job humanizing him. It also seems the anime made Shuga younger - he was 20 in the show, which would make him... like... 23 here? So seven years older. It's funny, though, how Balsa at 30 was like "oh, I'm an old lady", and here Shuga at 30 is described as young. DOUBLE STANDARD, PROFESSOR UEHASHI!
ReplyDeleteShuga's cranky. I got the impression, from Dream, that he is way more political and... not conniving, but shrewd, maybe... than he seems at first glance. I appreciate that Chagum is more like a real kid. I also feel like the Mikado really ought to give more though to diplomatic relations. If the alliance with Sangal is so important, whether he hates Chagum or not he should be ensuring the trip goes well. So it seems he's a jerk to one and all, not just his kids. He deserves to be taken down imho.
I wonder what would happen if the Mikado, oh, tripped on his robes and scraped his hand or something. Certainly as an adult that's avoidable, but what about as a child? If a Yogo emperor or prince gets a cut or scrape, is that proof positive he's not a god and thus not fit to rule? Plus, like, it's okay for him to order various persons murdered, but only by proxy? Grumble such a hypocritical system grumble don't any of these countries have a good leader grumblegrumble
You caught a transliteration error! Should have been that Shuga was Chagum's tutor for 3 years, not that he was 30. I translated it correctly and typed it wrong. Serves me right for going so fast. :P To be fair to Uehashi, I don't think she tends to think of Balsa as all that old, either. Most of the people she comes across don't assume she is. She's a little weather-roughened from, y'know, living outside, but 30 (or 32 now, I suppose, since she was 30 in the first book) is hardly old. :P Even Balsa is only self-conscious about her age in her own cultural context, where people marry crazy young...and for all her competence, Balsa is always torn between conflicting lives she could have led, which also makes the passage of time a sticking point. I believe Shuga was 24 in the first book so my best guess here is that he's 25 or 26.
ReplyDeleteShuga's not as politically minded as the Holy Sage, but he definitely wants Chagum in charge of things. He's definitely capable of subterfuge and even villainy, but I don't think he could ever hurt Chagum at this point. (In the first book, he could have and almost did.) You'll get some hints into what the Mikado's diplomatic experience could have been like in the next chapter, where Chagum stuns absolutely everyone with the quality of his education.
I tend to think of the Mikado as brainwashed. His personality is so consistent, and his upbringing was so sheltered, that he never developed any awareness of anything outside his own importance. Perhaps, like Chagum, he rebelled once, and his equally heartless father punished him in such a way that it traumatized him forever. I remember the disappointed expression he gave Chagum for bringing real-world considerations into his purchase of a decorative sword (I think that was in Guardian of the Dream?). He really did seem genuinely disappointed, but in himself or in Chagum it's not entirely clear. The Mikado lives in an idealized reflection of reality that is not actually real. Reminders of that seem to irk him in ways that speak to his intelligence if nothing else. Who knows what Chagum would have become if the Nayugu Ro Im hadn't chosen him as a host.
I'm gonna give this away (since it'll be up today or tomorrow), but there is going to be an capital-A Accident at the start of the coronation ceremony. One involving Chagum, and deliberate violence against his person. If Chagum had simply been the son of the Mikado and nothing else, things would have gone very, very badly for him--and indeed that could have been taken as the god of New Yogo's power weakening if not for...well, you'll see how Chagum deals with it. (It's worth the wait. I promise.)
blogspot ate my friggin' reply to this. twice. I definitely cannot replicate it with the same articulation, but essentially: 1. Chagum's lucky Balsa raised him for a year, 2. the anime Mikado and anime Sagum seem to have been raised in a slightly less toxic atmosphere b/c both of them feel emotions and Sagum is a really nice and thoughtful young man. 3. book Sagum was not like that, 4. drama Mikado is the worst, and 5. it makes sense that if you raise someone in isolation telling them that they're a god and better than everyone else that they'd grow up to be a self-centered sociopath. so yes, perhaps the nameless Mikado can be forgiven for his awful personality.
DeleteThe Mikado, forgiven? No. Understood? Sure. People can be perfectly comprehensible, and completely awful; the two are not mutually exclusive.
DeleteMy father literally almost killed me with neglect. I'm not over it, really, but I don't let it eat at me anymore. Life's too short. One of the reasons I was drawn to this story was Chagum's search for a real family.
I really liked anime Sagum and was really sad when book Sagum was...not that. :( But it's all part of the same system. Sagum was raised just like the Mikado was, and he would probably have become a similar sort of man if he'd lived.
I'm sorry Blogspot ate your previous posts :( Damn those internet gremlins. They're always hungry.
Sorry, poor word choice on my part. I meant to say it just makes sense - like you said. But he's still a villain, even if the Mikado doesn't know it. I'm just sad that the drama version is so much closer to the book characterization than the anime version. I actually dreamt last night that they had to tone him down in the drama because text audiences hated him so much that the show was getting panned. SIIIIIIIGH.
DeleteI'm sorry that you had to go through that. One of the things that resonated with me (with the anime especially) about this story was that no one was really evil, and by the end of the story everyone had sort of figured each other out and learned to work together. I wish more people could be like that in real life - willing to learn each other's stories and be understanding towards each other and willing to work together even if they have fundamental disagreements. But, of course, the anime version was a lot more positive in that regard than the books are, I'm continuing to discover. :/ Still, Tanda, Balsa, Chagum, and their support network continue to be examples of how to maintain moral integrity in the face of crappy political forces and other dangers, and that's powerful in its own right. Hugs for you across the internet and great respect for getting through and not only surviving but thriving.
I'm copying my comments before I publish them now. XD BLOGSPOT WON'T THWART ME AGAIN.
Heh, I do the same thing (typing comments elsewhere and posting them here) :)
DeleteI actually do think the final scene with the Mikado and Chagum in the drama is redemptive in a way. It's hard to tell because they barely speak, but the Mikado's sacrifice saves Chagum (as a by-product, not as part of a plan) even if he doesn't think of it that way at all. And results matter, at least as much as intentions.
I think your criticism of the text i.e. the Mikado is fair, because virtually every other character (including the leaders of the Talsh empire!) get more nuance and sophistication to their character than he does. I tend to think of him as just being too far gone, and illustrative of what would have happened to Chagum if he'd lived the life that was planned for him. The Mikado is Chagum's Ghost of Christmas Future, and it ain't pretty. I think you'll generally be pleasantly surprised by many of the other main characters in the end. There is definitely a desire for cooperation and building bridges that culminates in some very impressive scenes (and, of course, a great outcome. :) )
Hmm, I'll be really surprised if Raul comes across as much better than the Mikado. In the drama they had that whole thing with him crying in the mud, but I do not think that book!Raul will be much like drama!Raul, except maybe insofar as both are brutal, calculating, and merciless. But, I am eager to find out!
DeleteBut I seriously have not hated a villain as much as I hate drama!Mikado since Dolores Umbridge in the Harry Potter books, and that's saying something. >_<
I hate the Mikado less than Umbridge (slightly) because I understand him better. Where does a monstrosity like Umbridge even come from? O_o And like Umbridge, part of the reason he's so bad is that he's indulged too far in everything.
DeleteRaul is like the Mikado in that he's blind to anything that doesn't reflect his own importance, but that's kind of where the similarities end. He's ambitious, charismatic, and people (some, anyway) trust him. His ambition leads him to be entirely inflexible (unlike the Mikado, who can be manipulated by playing to his ego), which leads to the subjugation and virtual slavery of most of his subjects. His main contrast character, IIRC, is Chagum, because Chagum's style of leadership is 100% different, and Chagum is not the sort of person to sit idly by and let others be crushed without at least attempting to do something about it.
Chagum is Lawful Good, the Mikado is Lawful Evil, and Raul is Chaotic Evil? LOL And Balsa is Chaotic Good. And Hyuugo is True Neutral. XD
Delete...and I forgot to switch to posting as platypusbutt or evilreceptionistofdoom. Whoops.
DeleteEh, no biggie. We all have a million internet personalities anyway. :P
DeleteDon't forget Chagum (Neutral Good), Shuga (Lawful Good), Torogai (just Chaotic) and Tanda (Neutral Good) :)
Mon is Lawful Neutral. Neutral Evil? Maybe the Rarunga. XD
DeleteAge updates (I did some poking around :) )
ReplyDeleteAt the start of the first book, Balsa was barely 30. Shuga was a little over 20 (so they're 10 years apart). Chagum is 11. Balsa is 2-3 years older than Tanda, so we'll put Tanda (conservatively) at 27. Torogai is well into her seventies, but Guardian of the Dream isn't specific enough to pinpoint exactly where.
Traveler of the Void takes place while Chagum is 14, so 2 and a half years (or so) have passed since the first book. Balsa should be around 32, Shuga 22, Tanda 29-30, and Torogai still solidly in her seventies (probably).
Ughhhh I really need to make a timeline. Maybe I should put it on the wiki. As reference for the kids who want to write giant decades-spanning epic fanfiction serieses. XDX
DeleteI started making one. https://moribito.fandom.com/wiki/Timeline_of_Events
DeleteWoohoo! :) Thank you! That will be incredibly helpful.
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