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Guardian of Heaven and Earth - Rota - Part 2 Chapter 6 - Ahal Tosaha

 Guardian of Heaven and Earth

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Rota

(Book 8 of the Guardian of the Spirit Series)

Author: Uehashi Nahoko
Translator: Ainikki the Archivist
 

 Part 2 - Enemies Among Friends

Chapter 6 - Ahal Tosaha

 

    The Kashal did take Balsa to their leader, but it was a long time before Balsa was permitted to talk to them. The Kashal spent hours in consultation and discussion with one another, doubtless debating what to do with her. Balsa spent those hours confined to a small inn just outside of Tsuram. She couldnt help thinking about what had happened to Chagum. She had water hauled in for a cold bath and cleaned herself up, then considered the events of the past few days.

    Balsa wondered if Hugo had managed to escape safely. She assumed he had; he didnt seem the the sort of man to die easily. He had told her about the two factions that existed within the Talsh spy network and about the southern clan lords betrayal of Rota. Balsa had fallen in with the Kashal again, but she still had no idea what to expect. The mysteries surrounding Chagum and his whereabouts were like a whirlpool without a bottom. She tried to organize everything she knew in her mind, but the pieces were too complicated for her to form a complete picture of the situation.

    All in all, the Kashal deliberated for more than two days. A young man came to fetch Balsa on the morning of the third day after shed been shut up inside the inn. Prepare yourself and come with me, the man said. Our leader has agreed to meet with you. After a short pause, he added, Your weapons are with our leader. If you mean no harm, youll be permitted to collect them.

    Balsa followed the young man outside. There were horses tethered just outside the inn. Balsa mounted a horse and followed the man along the Sal highway, which faced north. The man was mounted as well, so when the path leveled off and widened, he urged his horse into a gallop. Balsa did the same.

    The Sal highway ran along the line of the Hura river for a long way before connecting with the Kings highway at a large crossroads. The man kept galloping and turned onto the Kings highway. After about two hours, he turned his horse eastward onto a narrower path. Balsa followed him closely.

    The narrower path crossed an enormous field teeming with ripe wheat stalks. The air smelled damp and earthy; the weather was warm. It had been an exceptionally good growing year for wheat in Rota; most farmers had been able to harvest their wheat twice. The deep blue sky contrasted with the pale yellow sheen of the wheat.

    The young man directed his horse onto a narrow path that had been made between sections of the wheat field. The wind blew through the wheat, making the heads glitter and gleam like silver and gold. Balsa followed the man to the very edge of the field to the border of a forest.

    After they were hidden in the trees, the young man turned to Balsa and said, Please dismount. The location of our leader is hidden, so we must travel the rest of the way secretly. Your eyes must be covered to protect the location of our village.

    Balsa slipped off the horse without saying a word. The young man placed a blindfold over her eyes, then helped her mount up again. He stayed alongside her to help guide her as they passed through the woods.

    The horse knows the way, he said after a little while. Just leave it to him and well all make it safely.

    Balsa nodded in acknowledgement. She couldnt see a thing through the thick black cloth of the blindfold. Balsa tried to use the sounds and smells around her to create a mental map of her location. The horse started moving in a zig-zag pattern and opted for a slow pace, so she guessed that the horse was climbing.

    The journey from the fields edge was a long one. The young man turned toward Balsa during their long ascent and said, Say...can I ask you something?

    Go ahead, Balsa said.

    Is it true that you defeated Shihana in single combat?

    Balsa chuckled, but didnt answer the question.

    Ive seen Shihana fight before. The young mans voice was awed. She was amazing. The best fighter in our entire river clan. Theres no way anyone could be a match for her.

    The young mans voice was suddenly louder; he must have come closer. I can tell youre a warrior, though. And very likely a good one. If you really defeated Shihana, I wish youd tell me. My brother would be shocked and amazed if I told him I met you!

    Your brother? Balsa asked with a little laugh. Where is he?

    Back in that inn we just left. He was still unconscious this morning, but he was moving around. Hell be fine in a few days.

    The young man seemed reluctant to say more. He and Balsa traveled silently for a few more minutes; then the young man reached out and grabbed her hand. All right. Were here. I can remove your blindfold now.

    The young man untied the blindfold and pulled it down. Balsa blinked at the sudden onslaught of harsh, clear sunlight after so much time spent in darkness and wiped reflexive tears out of her eyes. There was another wide wheat field in front of her. If she squinted, she could see thin trails of smoke rising from the ground beneath the planted wheat. The red light of the setting sun shone along the surface of a river that was likely the Hura; the wheat field stopped at the riverbank and gave way to more forest.

    Balsa saw some people fishing with nets along the riverbank. A little further downstream, women were washing clothes. Everyone wore a strip of yellow cloth around their necks.

    So this is a Kashal village...

    Balsa remembered that the Kashal were also known as Rotas river people. The young man next to her removed a long length of yellow cloth from a saddlebag and tied it around his own neck. He pointed to the cloth and said, This is an osshal. We believe that it warms the soul.

    Warms...the soul?

    The young man nodded. The souls of good-hearted people who pass on are always yellow. Some of us can see them. They feel warm. Theyre the same color as our watch-fires at night.

    The young mans eyes clouded over. My cousin was killed in that attack on the warehouse. Please look over there.

    The young man pointed toward the river. Balsa saw a long yellow strip of something like string floating in the current. She squinted and noticed that the string itself wasnt yellow, but white. The yellow color came from tiny flowers that had been threaded through the string.

    The last flower added to that string is my brothers soul, the young man said. The flowers slide off the string into the river one by one, returning the souls of our dead to the river god. We wear these yellow bands so that they will recognize us as good spirits and stay in the village until their souls pass on.

    Balsa remembered the man shed seen face-down and unmoving in the warehouse. Had the Kashal carried him all the way here?

    The young man sighed and smoothed his expression. Were headed there, he said, pointing. Well leave the horses here and walk the rest of the way. Tie the reins to these trees so my friends will find the horses.

    Balsa did as she was asked and followed the young man toward the forest on the other side of the river. The women washing clothes and the people fishing all looked up as they passed. The grass was knee-high in most places and the path was only wide enough for one person to pass at a time. Balsa followed the young man closely. Once in a while, she caught a glimpse of someones face watching them, but when she turned to look the face was always gone. Clearly, she was being watched.

    A tousle-haired little boy appeared on her right-hand side. He was chewing on grass. Balsa stopped to look at him, since he wasnt shying away from her. He looked to be about five or six years old. As Balsa watched, he spat out the grass in his mouth and squealed in delight as it startled a hidden flock of waterfowl behind him.

    A little girl appeared to Balsas left, looking at her with huge round eyes. She was chewing on grass as well. The young man guiding Balsa laughed a little and pretended that he didnt see the children.

    As they progressed forward through the grass, Balsa heard a strange sound like whistling or music; people played stalks of grass like tiny flutes. She wondered if all of the players were children and burst out laughing.

    The young man couldn’t help himself; he laughed as well. 

    The riverbed appeared in front of them. The river was shallow here, so they crossed and started climbing a steep incline. The grasslands receded with every step, giving rise to a muddy, rocky area. The stones protected the riverbanks from eroding quickly, which also helped protect the Kashal’s underground homes.

    The young man stopped suddenly over a thick clump of grass that looked pretty much like all the other clumps of grass that Balsa had seen and pressed down deliberately with his foot two times. The grass parted, revealing two people concealed in a hole below.

    “This is our leader’s house,” the young man said.

    Balsa crouched down and looked into the hole. There were crude steps leading down to an even lower level, blocked by a middle-aged man. When Balsa met his gaze, he nodded.

    “Welcome. Please come in. Our leader is awaiting you.”

    The stairs were very narrow. Balsa had to bend over so that she wouldn’t hit her head as she descended. When she reached the very bottom of the steps, her eyes widened in surprise. The room she saw was very large and tall enough to stand comfortably in. It was also brightly lit: as light as day. The walls of the room were formed of the same stone she’d seen when she and her guide had climbed up the riverbank. The light came from the sun; there were tiny gaps in the wall that permitted sunlight to shine in. The quality of the light was thick and golden, as if the room had been covered in a thick blanket of illumination.

    Everything appeared to be white: the walls, the floor, the ceiling. Only the hearth was black with uncleaned soot. Shelves lined the walls. Balsa saw boxes of supplies and jugs of water and other liquid along with dolls and children’s toys. The air was sweet-smelling, like candy.

    There was a low dining table in the middle of the room. A plump woman somewhat older than Balsa sat at the table with a baby in her lap. An old man with white hair sat next to her. The baby was silent, sleeping like a log. Balsa looked down and saw another child hiding underneath the table near the woman’s feet: it was a girl, maybe two or three years old.

    When the woman sitting at the table caught sight of Balsa, she stood up from her chair and passed the baby she held to the old man. The old man accepted the child easily; the baby didn’t wake.

    The old man called out to the little girl, “Hey! Want to come here and play with grandpa?” He bent down and lifted her up. With the baby held in one arm and the little girl in the other, he crossed the room and sat on a cotton rug.

    The plump woman beckoned to Balsa with a bright smile that made her appear much younger than she was.

    “It’s nice to meet you,” she said. “I am Ahal Tohasa, of the Tohasa river clan. You must be Balsa the spear wielder.”

    “Yes,” she said. She was a little confused. She knew nothing of Kashal families in Rota. She’d expected the leader of the Kashal in this region to be a man or at least a warrior, but Ahal Tohasa seemed to be an entirely ordinary woman.

    Ahal laughed when she saw Balsa’s expression. “I see. You don’t think I look much like a leader, do you? I know I don’t look like much, but there’s a lot that I can do--and I do it. Otherwise I wouldn’t have been chosen. But let’s put first impressions aside. Please take a seat.”

    Balsa set herself across from Ahal and sat down so that she faced her directly. The man Balsa had seen at the top of the stairs came down, then sat next to Ahal.

    “This is my husband,” Ahal said. She smiled at him, then turned her focused attention on Balsa.

    “Now isn’t all this odd? I never thought I’d meet you under these circumstances. You’re famous among the Kashal, you know. I’ve heard a song about you that I absolutely loved. Have you heard it? It goes like this…” She began to hum.

    Balsa grimaced and shook her head. “Nope. Never heard it before.”

    Ahal’s eyebrows went up. “Really? What a shame. But, well, you didn’t come here so that we could talk about that.”

    Her expression became serious. “You assisted us in a time of grave peril, when it seemed that Talhamaya would return to our world. I wish to express my gratitude to you on behalf of all of the Kashal.” She slapped her knees. “And now that that’s out of the way, we can talk about that warehouse attack.”

    She stood up and retrieved a tea tray that included cups, a steaming teapot, and baked candies that Balsa didn’t recognize.

    “We did attack that warehouse, but we didn’t expect things to get so violent,” she said. “We’ve been keeping watch on merchants that we assumed to be Talsh spies for quite a long time. We hoped to trail some of them home to their bases quietly, so that we could infiltrate their ranks and discover their secrets without being detected.

    “But Talsh spies are cautious. It was difficult to get close enough to watch them. But the morning of the attack, we saw one of them emerge from lord Suan’s palace. We weren’t absolutely certain that he was a spy, but when he led us straight to that warehouse, we were certain.”

    Balsa suddenly remembered what Hugo had said about enemy spies being scattered among the Nanyoku faction. Some of those must have helped Chagum escape. The Kashal must have followed one of them to Hugos hiding place.

    When we discovered the warehouse, we got a little over-excited. We knew wed have to move quickly before we were discovered and they moved to a new location, so we decided to attack immediately. The rest you know; you were there.

    Maybe you disagree with our methods. But weve encountered these spies before. If they knew of us, they would not rest until every single one of us was dead. We had to eliminate that threat before they eliminated us. I apologize for putting you in danger, unwitting or not. The responsibility for ordering the attack was mine and mine alone.

    Ahal looked at Balsa with a hooded gaze, as if she were ashamed.

    I am curious, Balsa the spear wielder--what were you doing in that warehouse? I highly doubt that you are a Talsh spy.

    Im looking for someone, Balsa said quietly. I heard that hed gone to lord Suans palace. I tried to learn more from the guards who work there, but then I was attacked. Balsa told Ahal everything that had happened to her over the past week or so, omitting Chagums name and that Hugo had escaped.

    Ahal listened to her intently. When Balsa stopped speaking, she ran a hand through her hair and said, I see. I heard about the attack on the tavern. You have no reason to lie to us, so I have no reason to doubt your story. Please forgive me for pressing you when Im sure you have questions yourself. She paused, then added, I feared that you were responsible for the death of one of our own, Oguhal--but it seems that is not the case. We found another mans body next to his, so it seems likely that this other man was the killer, as we first suspected.

    Ahal paused, then said, But some things still dont make sense to me. Why did you flee during the attack? Why did you steal a boat? She stared at Balsa with piercing eyes. Ill tell you something else, for friendships sake. Our spies saw the boat leaving the warehouse. There were two people on it, not just one.

    Balsa held Ahals gaze. Balsa no longer thought she appeared to be an ordinary woman. She believed that Ahal had the authority and force of will to order the attack on that warehouse.

    Ahals eyes were sharp, but her tone remained calm as she said, You escaped on that boat with the man who killed Oguhal, didnt you? So that you wouldnt be discovered and caught by the others. Balsa, why are you shielding a Talsh spy?

    Balsa responded with equal calm. He saved my life, she said. During that attack on the tavern, I was poisoned. He carried me to safety and made sure I had medicine. If Id left him behind during my escape, he would have burned to death in that warehouse.

    Ahal frowned slightly. But didnt you see Oguhal lying dead there? You must have. You must have known that the Talsh spy killed him--yet you continue to protect him. Ill ask again: why?

    Balsa looked straight at Ahal and said, Yes, he killed someone. I knew that. But I couldnt leave him to die. I owed him a debt. Besides, I could have died in the fire that you and your allies set. She thought a moment. And if Id tried to escape in the boat, wouldnt Oguhal have tried to shoot me, if he could?

    Ahal opened her mouth to say something, then closed it. Yes, she said reluctantly. Youre right. He would have shot you. She sighed and shook her head.

    But I still have questions. Why would a Talsh spy save you from those men at the tavern? Why would he assist in your escape from the fire? She looked at Balsa with eyes that seemed to search for the bottom of her soul.

    Balsa had no desire to be Ahals enemy, but she also didnt want to tell her everything she knew. If she described the internal conflicts that existed within the Talsh spy network, Ahal would only want to know more. Balsa would probably be compelled to tell her everything she knew--including everything she knew about Hugo.

    I dont know, she said. Honestly. The drug I was given knocked me out, and then I couldnt move for more than a day. I didnt see him for most of that time. We barely spoke before the attack.

    Ahal regarded her with a distrustful expression. But you escaped together? So you must have spoken? Must have planned something together?

    Balsa shook her head. Nothing so sophisticated. The man I escaped with had an arrow in his thigh, a wound in his side and a high fever. He wasnt thinking well enough to plan anything.

    Ahals eyebrows drew together. She glanced over at her husband, then over at the old man and the two children sitting in the corner.

    The old man cradled the baby on his knees and said, That woman is telling the truth. Shes hiding something, but shes not lying. Thats what I think.

    Ahals husband nodded in agreement with this assessment.

    Ahals shoulders relaxed. She looked down at the floor for a moment, clearly deep in thought. She lifted her head and said, All right. We didnt know you were in the warehouse when we attacked. If things had gone badly, you could have died. She grinned a bit sheepishly. Its like Crown Prince Chagum said. Trying to interrogate you is like trying to get soup from a stone.

    Balsas heart skipped beat. Youve seen Crown Prince Chagum?

    Yes. She smiled brightly. I would have told you sooner, but, well, you can never be too careful in these times.

    Ive been keeping watch over lord Suans palace of for years. Sufar, the leader of the Kashal in the north, gave me those orders long ago. I have many allies and friends inside the palace. The palace itself is riddled with tunnels and secret passages, so its relatively easy to get in and out. She chuckled.

    About two weeks ago, I heard a funny tale from one of our spies who watches the gate. Lord Suans son Ogon met a young man there dressed in Rassharou fashion, though he did not appear to be a Rassharou fisherman. Our spy was too far away to hear what they discussed, but he observed lord Ogon dismounting from his horse and leading Crown Prince Chagum into the palace. Shortly after, he observed a merchant who we know to be a Talsh spy enter the gate, as if he were following them.

    Ahal then had the maids in the palace keep an eye on this strange visitor. Crown Prince Chagum was kept confined, but given polite treatment. We wondered who he was. He had appeared mysteriously and seemed to be a hostage. The maids reported that he was indeed being treated well; it didnt seem like lord Suan wanted to kill him. But he was never allowed outside his rooms.

    Our spies tried to contact him directly. To do that, we would have to find some way to remove him from his guest chamber. Before we could think of a way to reach him, he managed to escape himself. 

    Ahal laughed. It seems that lord Suans granddaughter was smitten with him. Can you believe it? Well, she is a tremendous flirt, so perhaps we should not have been so surprised. She liked to meet with him, thinking herself secret. Crown Prince Chagum convinced her to go out walking in the garden with him at midnight, alone.

    Balsa smiled as she listened, imagining Chagum sneaking out of his room for a secret tryst with a girl. Hes the right age to be doing things like that...

    Crown Prince Chagums ploy succeeded. He made up some excuse so that she wouldnt come looking for him immediately, then climbed over the garden wall. The girl screamed for the guards as soon as she realized what had happened, but our spies found him before they did and led him into the secret tunnels beneath the palace.

    Balsa nodded, frowning a little as she listened. And he said his name was Crown Prince Chagum? He told you that?

    Ahal nodded. You know that we work for the King of Rota. Hed heard of us, and told us who he was as soon as he was convinced that we would help him reach the King. We sent him on to the northern palace after his escape.

    Ahal reached for her teacup and drank.

    We didnt believe him at first, Ahal said. Crown Prince Chagum is supposed to be dead. None of us had ever seen his face before, so it was hard to verify that he was telling the truth. He understood why we doubted him and remained calm. He claimed that hed met King Yosam in Sangal, so all that would be needed to prove his identity would be to lead him before the King. That was all he asked for.

    Ahal shook her head slowly. He was so kind, yet so guarded. And clearly very brave.

    Which way did he go? Balsa asked. And when?

    He went north, Ahal said.

    To the northern palace? Is that where King Yosam is right now?

    No, Ahal said, a little sadly. Most people dont know this yet, but King Yosams health is very poor. Hes in no condition to receive visitors, even if he wanted to.

    Is he sick? How bad is it?

    Ahals concern was plain on her face. No one knows how severe the illness is. The only consistent symptom is a high fever. His father died of a similar illness when he was quite young. Naturally, were all worried for our King.

    Ahal sighed, then said, Right now, the one who does all the actual governing is Prince Ihan. We sent Crown Prince Chagum to him. Prince Ihan is in a good position to help him. Hes been consolidating support from the northern clan lords ever since the southern clan lords openly defied him at our nations founding ceremony. Prince Ihan resides in the northern palace, not in the royal palace at the capital. Its safer for him there.

    The northern palace. Balsa knew it: it was in Jitan, where Rotas Ritual Hall was situated.

    So Crown Prince Chagum is in Jitan?

    Ahal nodded, then stood up. She removed a single scroll from a shelf on the wall and turned toward Balsa. Crown Prince Chagum talked about you a lot.

    Balsa held her breath and looked up at Ahal.

    When he told us who he was, I remembered that song I love. I decided to ask him about his past--to verify his identity and to figure out which parts of the song were true. She shrugged. Crown Prince Chagum seemed shocked that I would ask him such a thing.

    Balsa remained silent.

    He wouldnt answer my questions, but he did leave this letter here in case we found you anywhere in Rota. He wanted us to tell you that he was safe, and what his plans were.

    When did he give you this letter?

    The same day we brought you here, in the afternoon.

    Balsa looked at Ahal with a hard-edged expression. You must have known who I was looking for when you brought me here, yet you sent him away with a three-day head start. You kept me confined here for all that time. Why would you do that? Why didnt you let me go with him--or at least go after him?

    Crown Prince Chagum asked us to, Ahal said. She extended the parchment she held to Balsa. He wrote this for you. He wrote it in front of me and didnt care if I read it or not. All he wanted was for me to deliver it to you. 

    Balsa accepted the letter and began to read. It was written in Rotan, in a firm and clear hand.

 

Balsa,

I know youre searching for me. Thank you. Im happy beyond words that you made it all the way here to Rota safely. I wanted to meet you when you came in with the other Kashal, but I couldnt. I need to ask you to stop looking for me. Im certain that Tanda needs your help more than I do. New Yogo will soon be at war. If I dont succeed in my plan, and soon, then every town and city and field will become a sheet of fire. Find Tanda and Torogai and flee to the mountains while theres still time. Hunters Hole should work well to hide you.

As long as I know youre all alive somewhere, I can keep trying. Im fine, Balsa, really. Please dont worry about me. I swear that Ill make it back to New Yogo safely someday, no matter what happens.

 

    Tears streamed down Balsas cheeks, but she didnt notice them. She stared down at the letter and read it over again with her shoulders clenched. When she looked up at Ahal, she was crying as well.

    Please dont worry, she said. I sent him directly to Prince Ihan with an escort. Hell be perfectly safe.

    Balsa nodded in thanks. She had no doubt that Ahal was telling the truth. The Kashal opposed the southern clan lords in almost all things; helping Crown Prince Chagum would deal those greedy lords a blow that it would be difficult to recover from. She was glad the Kashal had rescued Chagum before he could be handed over to the Talsh.

    While she was happy that Chagum was being protected right now, she would much rather protect him herself. The idea that hed deliberately left her behind made her heart hurt.

    Will you go home? Ahal asked softly. I have your spear here, and your pack, but you dont seem to have much by way of money or supplies. We can give you what you need to get you on your way. Just ask.

    Balsa smiled. Thank you, but Im fine. I have a fair bit of money sewn into my clothes, and Im used to traveling alone. If possible, I would like to borrow a horse from you. Ill leave it at Tsuram with a horse lender so that you can come to collect it.

    Certainly, well lend you a horse. Where will you return it, specifically?

    Okul street, at the Taku Hol inn. My own horse is there. I paid in advance for more than a week, so its probably still there.

    Ahal nodded.

    I know the Taku Hol inn. Its right on the sea. Leave the horse there and well come and collect it.

    Ahals husband picked up Balsas spear and passed it to her. The light streaming in from holes in the wall was dimming and turning red; the day had passed and it was almost sunset. The baby that lay in the old mans arms was still sound asleep.



 

13 comments:

  1. What I always enjoyed about the Moribito series is that the most powerful people are often women, but also that their strength and skills are earned through their own efforts. Ahal seems to be a good example of such a person. I loved the vivid description of the journey to the village and how Balsa finds herself in a gray area, saving a spy that saved her life, but also feeling regretful for leading to the death of one of the river people. I'm definitely excited to see Chagum's perspective in the next chapter or so. And thanks as always for the lovely chapter, as I continue to look forward to them every few days.

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    1. That's one of the reasons I love Moribito. A lot of fantasy books seem to treat women more like macguffins or plot tokens or at worst, they even put them in the fridge as TV Trope describes the act of killing one character to motivate another. Here, the women drive the plot just as much if not more than the men.

      I don't know how well this series passes the Bechdel test though ...

      Ainikki said we won't see Chagum in person until the epilogue.

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    2. I think recently we have been seeing more fantasy novels that put women in the spotlight rather than having them be a love interest or be the obligatory victim who either dies to motivate somebody or has to get rescued rather than pulling out a sword to kill the monster of the day.

      Compare the Harry Potter books to Lord of the Rings. Big difference.

      On another note, have you read the Stormlight Archive? These are a series of very long fantasy novels written by Brandon Sanderson. Apparently they have sold something like a hundred million copies worldwide compared to about one million for the Moribito franchise, and yet I seldom ever hear anybody talk about them. They don't seem to have really entered the cultural zeitgeist in the way that Harry Potter did. I guess its like the Avatar movie which on paper looks like it was popular (especially in China) but hardly anybody even talks about them or references them in their own fiction.

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    3. @WaterDarkE I completely agree! This chapter treads a lot of moral gray areas that make this story a lot richer than most children's novels. :) The detour here is well-paced (though, like everyone, I'm impatient to get to Chagum) and some of the plot threads come together here if you squint, though everything will be more obviously revealed in the next chapter. I'm glad you continue to look forward to these! I wish I could go faster, but work and commutes are back. That's all right, though. I don't mind the world starting to go back to normal around here. :)

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    4. @Great Seishun This series passes the Bechdel test just fine! Balsa has Torogai, the Second Queen, Kaina and Asra to talk to (off the top of my head) and none of their preoccupations are about a man. You could argue that Balsa's a bit Chagum-obsessed (especially in this novel) but she's also survival-obsessed and emphatically does not live her life by any arbitrary rules (dictated by men or otherwise).

      I've read some Sanderson, though not Stormlight (Rithmatist), and enjoyed it, but it's a very different animal from these, and from Harry Potter, where the magic systems rest very lightly on the story's shoulders. Sanderson is careful with his magic systems and uses them as a significant part of the story. Even Guardian of Heaven and Earth doesn't have a ton of magic weaving (we'll see Tanda do some in this book) and what there is seems to hew closely to cultural anthropology and religion.

      I have a theory that the better and more satisfying canon is, the less it gets reinterpreted and retold, as fanworks/headcanons/fans tossing theories around, etc. Everything that Sanderson creates is well-made and his endings tend to be the satisfying sort...a bit of dissatisfaction is necessary for transformative works to take off, I think. Also room for unanswered questions.

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    5. And yes, sadly: we won't see Chagum in person until the Epilogue. (Well, the chapter right before it, too.) But at least the epilogue is long. :)

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    6. @Great Seishun, I definitely agree with your points! Especially with the whole female empowerment movement going on recently, with more mixed results. Like the recent Star Wars trilogy... As for Stoemlight Archive, it sounds like a really intriguing series! I have never read it before, but it seems to be something worth looking into.

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  2. @Ainikki, will be looking forward to seeing Chagum in the epilogue for sure! And the upcoming chapter as well as events and threads start to come together. The world is starting to recover, so we can't do much about commutes really... And also, would you be interested in creating a way for us to communciate with each other a bit more easily, even if its about Moribito stuff or the upcoming Deer King film? I don't mind commenting on chapters like I have been, but it would be nice to have a place to do exactly that more easily. Like, with Discord or something like that.

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    1. Sorry to butt in, WaterDarkE, but I wouldn't recommend Discord for this purpose. That site has a really bad user interface and I've found that the community atmosphere is reminiscent of YouTube comment sections.

      Maybe we can get the people running the wiki to set up a forum (although that might be expensive), or if we don't mind losing the anonymity we can set up a Facebook group for Moribito fans?

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    2. So, I'm trying this out, but I don't have much bandwidth to be a forum moderator, so my intention is to set this up and let people have fun running with it. If it stops being fun (so, if anyone is abusive or mean), I will shut this down. https://guardianofthespirit.createaforum.com/general-discussion/

      I'm not a stickler for staying perfectly on topic, though. If y'all want to discuss non-Uehashi or Moribito-related things, have at it. :)

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    3. @Ainikki, I'll figure out how to use the forum! I have never really used one before, but it sounds reasonable to learn how to. ;D

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    4. @Great Seishin, it's interesting that your stance on Discord is very different from mine as I find it to be relatively easy to use, and also on multiple devices. I feel that it really depends on who is using a specific server, and with how niche Moribito is in the West, and who is reading this blog consistently, I don't think it really is a problem. I could even make a server with just the three of us tbh. It doesn't have to be particularly large in any way.

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